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Runner-boy by Chii Ọganihu

Black and white image of two blurred figures running in an empty parking garage against an urban backdrop; title card for the FPP Editors' Choice piece, "Runner-boy" by Chii Oganihu.

Chii Ọganihu’s “Runner-boy” is one of three editors’ choice selections for the CRAFT 2025 Flash Prose Prize, guest judged by Grant Faulkner. Our editors chose these pieces with particular focus on the power of style, form, and voice within the constraints of flash prose.


“Runner-boy…is for all who have found themselves in tight corners,” Chii Ọganihu writes in her author’s note. This flash has a propulsive quality that effectively matches its subject matter. With little context, dialogue, or characterization, we find ourselves inside Runner-boy’s head, thrust into the action alongside him. We feel his panic of being outnumbered five-to-one, the need to escape at all costs. The prose propels us down the hallway, over the balcony, and even with an injured wrist, over that glass-lined fence. “Phew,” we think. “Safe at last.” And then, the last line arrives with its understated turn from triumph to tragedy. 

The author’s use of Nigerian Pidgin in the narrator’s interior monologue offers one of the few clues about where we are. With very few words, she skillfully moves the story from general to specific. Along with the narrator’s abandoned shoes, the story lingers, making us want to know more about the circumstances that have led Runner-boy into and then out of that apartment, the world he inhabits and (hopefully) goes on to survive.  —CRAFT


 

The boy stood no chance, really. They were five against his one, young men like him no older than twenty-three.

He first sensed that something was wrong when one of the boys locked the heavy entrance door, leaned against it, and pocketed the key while another shifted almost imperceptibly behind the sofa where our boy was seated. From the corner of his eye, he saw the guy who’d invited him exchange a loaded glance with the one stationed at the door.

Our boy did not need to be told twice: Yawa don gas.

Quick, he scoped out a bright corridor leading off from the sitting room towards what he gauged was outside light. Without even weighing his chances, he sprang out of the sofa and ran for the corridor. The occupants of the apartment hollered after him and the pursuit began.

When he reached the balcony at the end of the corridor, Runner-boy did not think twice. He held onto the railing—on the top floor of the two-storey building—and leapt. The devil he knew was worse, far worse, than anything lying at the bottom of a high jump.

Runner-boy hit the concrete floor with a thud that would have alarmed him under normal circumstances. When he tried to lift himself, he discovered that one wrist was twisted out of its socket. Fuck the wrist; he dragged himself up, dashed to the big black gate, and found it unfortunately locked. By this time, the five boys on his trail had run down the stairs and were now pouring into the compound. Runner-boy’s eyes darted to the fence: too high with nothing to grip for scaling. Fuck fuck fuck.

He turned towards the only option that remained: right, where stood a water tank elevated by an overhead stand. He made for the stand and wriggled to the top like a lizard. From there, he vaulted over to the fence, holding on with his one good hand and struggling not to slip. It was one of those fences topped off with broken pieces of glass.

The five young men below him ran frantically about the yard, eyeing the fence and Runner-boy’s dangling legs. Mark am, mark am! No let am escape! the main guy was yelling.

Runner-boy steadied himself on the fence and, with one mighty heave, hauled himself over it. He fell in a heap into the bush behind the building. Both his hands were bleeding. Shards of the broken glass that ringed the fencetop had gone through his palms. His clothes were in tatters and his body was quaking. He rose again and began stumbling through the bush, which was when he realised his feet were bare. He had left his shoes in that apartment.

 


CHII ỌGANIHU was born in Enugu, Nigeria. Their short fiction and poetry have appeared in McSweeney’s, Banshee, New Orleans Review, and elsewhere. Her work was shortlisted for the 2025 Dream Foundry Writing Contest and has been nominated for a Pushcart Prize. Ọganihu has received fellowships, scholarships, and residencies from Brooklyn Poets, the McCormack Writing Center, Seventh Wave, Off Assignment, and Ubwali. She can be found on Instagram and Twitter @chiioganihu.

 

Featured image by Afiq Fatah, courtesy of Unsplash.

 

Author’s Note

I did not actually set out to write a flash story. This was supposed to be the opening scene of a much longer story I’d already mapped out in my head. But midway into it, my vision for the narrative changed and I decided to go in a different direction. I was left with this bit, which I kept returning to and tweaking. As it happened, I was reading some flash stories around that time, and it occurred to me that this might work as a standalone flash, and so I tweaked it some more with that in mind.

Why did this fragment stick in my head? Apart from the heart of the story, which I’ll tell you about in a bit, what kept me coming back to this was its electricity. There’s a current running through it, an immediate sense of tension and foreboding and danger that I found thrilling. I wanted to ride that thrill. The first paragraph, which came much later, captures that note of frisson: “The boy stood no chance, really. They were five against his one, young men like him no older than twenty-three.”

Now to the heart. The seed of this story is the kito phenomenon in Nigeria. Kito is a really insidious form of honey trapping by which homophobic individuals organise themselves into crime rings to target queer people. A man pretends (usually online) to be friendly, gains the confidence of a queer man, and entices him to a prearranged place where they (the honey trap and his gang members) set upon their victim. My original vision for the story was a subversion of the kito ring; that is, a counter-kito ring that targets kitoers. A revenge plot, so to speak. However, in refashioning this bit as a flash piece without the kito element, I chose to leave the possibilities open. We don’t know who Runner-boy is, nor his motive, nor that of his attackers. We only know that a boy has been ambushed, violence is about to happen, and Runner-boy needs to run. Instinctively, we are drawn to the boy. We want him to succeed, to escape, because it’s human nature to root for the underdog.

Runner-boy, then, is for all who have found themselves in tight corners.

I did not want to name any of the characters. They are known by what they do (as in “Runner-boy”), not by some arbitrary names. I found that this added to the tension.

In writing this story, I had to capture a particular way of speaking using Nigerian Pidgin, our common creole, which the boys—or young men—would have spoken. What little dialogue or interior monologue there is had to be in Nigerian Pidgin. I loved playing with it here. There are so many ways to say that trouble has arrived, but I know few as poetic as “Yawa don gas.”

 


CHII ỌGANIHU was born in Enugu, Nigeria. Their short fiction and poetry have appeared in McSweeney’s, Banshee, New Orleans Review, and elsewhere. Her work was shortlisted for the 2025 Dream Foundry Writing Contest and has been nominated for a Pushcart Prize. Ọganihu has received fellowships, scholarships, and residencies from Brooklyn Poets, the McCormack Writing Center, Seventh Wave, Off Assignment, and Ubwali. She can be found on Instagram and Twitter @chiioganihu.